Diamante Poem

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 Hassan

Amiable, unreserved 

Helping, communicating, procrastinating 

Only trying to get through unscathed 

Deceiving, cheating, tricking

Two-faced, disingenuous 

Snakes






Comments

  1. arqam_here_2711 November 2020 at 23:56

    Marvelous work dude. The use of words is good and also the use of opposites is also mind blowing
    Masha'Allah.

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  2. Zaeem Shahid12 November 2020 at 03:07

    Good work bro! Superb selection of words. And the word snake is literally completely opposite to you

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  3. Sumran Shahid12 November 2020 at 23:08

    Nice work. The use of words is quite appropriate and the choice of opposite is perfect too.

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  4. Sherjeel12 November 2020 at 23:25

    Great use of words...Really appreciated❤

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  5. Syed Tallay Haidar13 November 2020 at 07:54

    A very elegant choice of vocabulary and beautiful and versatile wordplay which neatly go hand in hand.Well done indeed.

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  6. Waqar Rafique14 November 2020 at 04:09

    Splendid selection of words and a delightful construction of your character in this literary piece.Moreover,you chose a very good opposite subject.

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  7. Bilal Siddique14 November 2020 at 11:54

    Excellent use of vocabulary
    Keep it up.

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  8. Osama Jarrar Haider17 November 2020 at 22:03

    Nice. Your poem is quite a good representation of what I've experienced after spending time with you. Keep up the good work.

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  9. Muhammad Haroon18 November 2020 at 02:10

    Impressive! This beautiful piece of writing shows your grasp on literature. Keep up the good work.

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